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Ha you have me convinced! LOL! One other website that could really help is water.org. It has everything that you need to know about the water crisis (we're studying that in school) but you have a very convincing argument. If you would mention something about the connection to our life it could really impact people. On one of the worksheets that we did we found out that an average american person uses about 100+ gallons of water per day while an african family uses around 5 gallons of water per day. A single person uses the water in one day that an entire family uses in 20 days! Anyhow just making that connection would really make the people feel guilty (I did so I started a website to raise awareness www.allthewater.wordpress.com) so just MAKE THOSE CONNECTIONS!